POEM: SECOND LOOK

This is my composition for the CPC Saturday Share poetry challenge. Angel Love’s featured line is the first one in this poem.


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SECOND LOOK


Things are not always as they appear.
They can look worse till you come near.
Some look better after drinking beer.
Sometimes a big front hides a small rear.
A closer look may relieve your fear.

You may feel trapped, and it’s unclear:
“How the heck do I get out of here?”
It might even bring on a tear.
To this notion you should adhere:
You will make it if you persevere.

The second stanza was off topic
Which if you think, is quite ironic.
But first impressions can play a trick
It may take longer for it to click.
Keep at it, soon the truth will stick.

Copyright March 20th 2013 RGD

The persistent optimists who rallied a line: Angel Love (3), Bettie, Silver Lining.

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