POEM: Relativity

This was written and designed for the CPC Friday Fling poetry challenge, where the topic is notable odors, and the preferred formats Haiku or Limerick.  This is a variation on the Limerick which I developed a few years ago, where instead of the first line rhyming with the second and fifth, there is an internal rhyme in the first line, usually involving a name. A variation on that, with 7-7-5-5-7 syllables, I called a Slim Limerick. This one is a sort of hybrid between that and a real Limerick, and for that matter between a Clerihew and a Limerick.

 

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