Saturday Share: Come One – Come All!!!
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This is the blog where folks who decided
come and post their “Collab” Poetry!!!
Earlier in the week, a blog was posted inviting
everyone to come and give “One-More-Line”
to generate lines for this “Collab” Poetry.
This week we generated 89 Lines!
These are the folks who came to give lines this week:
(Click on avatars to visit profiles)
This week’s line was:
Hope that you will join in on the fun with collabs and/or comments!
Everyone can participate…you need not to have left any lines.
The lines are located here: Get Lost in the Lines
Pick a few, add a few of your own…and create!
And Please…
Love & Light,
Angel
SECOND LOOK
Things are not always as they appear.
They can look worse till you come near.
Some look better after drinking beer.
Sometimes a big front hides a small rear.
A closer look may relieve your fear.
You may feel trapped, and it’s unclear:
“How the heck do I get out of here?”
It might even bring on a tear.
To this notion you should adhere:
You will make it if you persevere.
The second stanza was off topic
Which if you think, is quite ironic.
But first impressions can play a trick
It may take longer for it to click.
Keep at it, soon the truth will stick.
Copyright March 20th 2013 RGD
The persistent optimists who rallied a line: Angel Love (3), Bettie, Silver Lining.
Life is to please
Be more givin and less tease
Yet all things are not always as they appear
Some trail kin be very hard to steer
Sometimes a big front hides a small rear
Closer inspection may relieve all your worst fear
*
Some things look better after youve had some beer
Even makes one talk more wit out any fear
Some times it even put you to tears
And all knows the truth is very hard to digested
Yet the truth is best suggested
Given good time we all have to be tested
*
Its bout time to start all new
Appearances can be deceivin
Yet most are will worthy of receivin
Eyes tell all focus on believin
Most things in the darkness looks so wired
Close your eyes and all is clear
*
Hot spots in the night gives me a great chill
A rush of adrenalin is such a thrill
Even with the winds blowin up hill feels
Oh my heart be still
I think um gonna become ill
Think I may just have ta take a pill
*
Look deep within one eyes kin so see all its not that hard
That is to say eye heart you
Hearts are pure love will flow in this is true
So often the unexpected path leads to a lot of fun
Like a beach walk down the path and lay out in the sun
Then enjoying the long run
*
Some times you have to look twice to make sure things are right
Especially as the day begins to melt into the night
Even times when we dont see we will be shown the light
And everything will be alright
All is very possible if just would
Like Bambi mother hold your deer near
*
Do but always hold true love near
With lots of warmth and closeness theres never need for fear
Keep silent and listen with your ear
Kin so hear the sweet sounds of music near
Have to admire those who stay strong with own cheer
I dont fear anything when Im looking at the sky
*
If my eyes see purple what about my ear
It is not anything you have to fear
Just one of many colors of love creepin though
And as be said
All things are not what they appear
Just but always do take that second look see before you tread onward
~*~
Written By: Bettie Davis ———————– © March 22 , 2o13
Things Are Not Always As They Appear
Take a closer look and you will see
Many have times when all seems alright but, isn`t
So much that happens in life is way beyond believing
Close your eyes and all is clear
Oh, may your heart be still
See things with your heart
Focus on believing
Even after all these years
Handing it over as he will listen and hear
Always and with a gentle ear
Kin so hear the sweet sounds of water making music near
Don’t fear anything when looking at the sky
Knowing everything will be alright
The warmth of love is what I’m receiving
Blessed with good friends here to cheer…..
That is to say, eye heart, you all
Angel Love, barbara k., Marcia Bettiem Chantal Boivent,Silver Lining, Scotorum
FORGING AHEAD
By Barbara K
A CPC Collab
Things aren’t always
as they appear,
you just never know
what you may see
or may hear.
Sometimes the good
turns out to be bad;
sometimes the happy
turns out to be sad.
And sometimes the light
turns out to be dark
especially as the day
begins to melt into night.
In fact, it’s often the path
hidden away from our sight
that leads to experiences
we might never have tried.
And since things aren’t
always as they appear,
let’s listen carefully
with our hearts and our ears,
accompanied on our journey
by good friends and cheer,
and let’s forge on ahead
with nothing to fear.
(c) barbara kausteklis 3-22-13
Thanks to Angel Love, Cherie, Marcia,
Bettie, Diane, Chantal Boivent
and Scotorum for sharing lines with me.
Apologies for not getting on last night, but the internet was not being co-operative! 🙄 Wonderful to get on and read all the wonderful collabs! Love & hugs to all! :love: :love: :love:
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CPC Collab with: Barbara K, Scotorum, Bettie, Marcia, Diane