Give me only a minute…

I know..

I know everything not to mention more

I know that maybe it’s better

but do not want to believe it

I was not there prepared it takes a breath to tell you.

goodbye

smoke and smell hot in here

of sweets and coffee

everybody for himself

is  normal but I’m bad, bad .

Just give me a minute

a puff of breath

another moment

to get it together ..

is finished

we understand

but saying it is hard

it was a good time, my time with you.

Just give me a minute

a puff of breath

another moment us quiet

and far

us by itself  ..

I’ll cry tomorrow

but how dare you how do ?

And then I look at the bottom of what you are

a fire early off

if you roll a bit ‘of wind

a game without commitment

but leaves a mark in you

. Just give me a minute

a puff of breath

another moment get it  together

is finished we understand

but saying it is hard

wake up ..wake me up

But it is true ..that  your breath is shaking

.. yes that is true.

How come your eyes are crying now

tell me it was a dream and we are waking up …

Lil d .love :love:

11 Comments

  • D_LEMUR says:

    The line , ” it was a good time, my time with you. ” , kind of summed this all up for me…..
    Good write my friend…..:)
    DL

  • OleTimes says:

    Awesome read! Thank you!

  • Barbara_K says:

    Feeling the powerful emotions within each word. I love how you have expressed them. :love: :love: :love:

  • Debbie_F says:

    Beautiful words LilD Even though some thing just weren’t to be sure dont make it hurt any less ,and sometimes when awful things happen you do think maybe its just a dream :love: :love:

Commenting on blog posts is coming back soon. You can read the comments here; to talk with a member now, leave a comment on their profile or send them a message.