INTO THE DARKNESS — CPC “Friday Fling Writes Around the Campfire”


 

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INTO THE DARKNESS

 

I hear them even now

when the night is still,

trailing off into the darkness

amid hushed whispers,

muffled shudders

and muted gasps,

the ghost stories

and scary tales we told

around the campfire

as the flames licked

the black of night,

stories told

at precisely midnight

when the moon

had reached its peak

and traveled halfway

toward the dawn.

And as the magic moonbeams

had us under their spell,

the flames of the campfire

leaping into the night,

their spits and crackles

punctuating the silence

and holding us in their grip,

to this day I remember

those stories that we shared

as they trailed off into night

with the smoky wisps

and fading embers

within the campfire’s glow.

 

(c) barbara kausteklis 7-8-11

 

Written for CPC Friday Fling/

“The Friday Fling Writes Around the Campfire.”

 

 

 

http://www.friendburst.com/blog/50121/friday-fling-writes-campfire/

 

 

Thanks always for your visits and comments.

 

~barb~

 

16 Comments

  • INKY says:

    your are so lucky to have great memoeries,, our camper guides forgot the food got us lost and i drowned in the lake that year so its was a bad one for me i woud have loved to see this fire and happy campers love and hugs inky

  • Jean_S says:

    I love campfires. I haven’t been camping in years. The Boy scout troop I helped with about broke me from wanting to years ago…LOL…Loved sharing yours. God bless,

  • Angel Love says:

    Wonderful…didn’t have time to do this one, but I love camping! :love:

  • LikaPika says:

    Oh, I LOVE campfires, even if they’re NOT on Fridays! Wiener roasts, S’mores, and most definitely ghost stories! Watching the flame is fascinating isn’t it? It’s relaxing.

  • valentine says:

    My cousins and I used to campfire on the beach at Lake Erie in Canada. It seems it was always midnight. This was a wonderful piece of narrative. I enjoyed as I always do your writes. I am a big fan. mari ana.

  • Rebel says:

    Beautiful as always, my friend! It sure brought back some memories 🙂

  • CreativePoetryCorral says:

    Camping is so much fun!!! I wonder if I’ll ever go again *smiling* I truely loved your campfire poem (((Barbara)))

  • Mary Margaret says:

    I miss these days thanks for the memory B :love: :love: :love:

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