Pick-Apart Poetry with Guest Poet Mary cohosted by Barbara and Silver Lining

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Hello and welcome all to another

Pick-Apart Poetry Challenge!

Our featured guest poet is none other then our friend

“Mary Margaret”

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Mary is a wonderful poet and has been with the CPC for several years! Please stop by

Her profile page and send her a friend request if you have not already done so!

http://www.friendburst.com/harkgirl67/

Here are some words Mary had to say about Poetry:


Poetry, The Reasons Why

As a child with not many friends
Sitting outside my window..
Roses planted there
Found a place of peace in my heart
Free, accepted, and not downed
Writing and traveling through my
Ink… Exploring places feelings
emotions I never knew..
Became my world.. a world of love
Darkness…Forgiveness… and pure
Magic… There no-one can take
This away….
There I could write for the roses!!

Writing for you brings
Me…such as you are
Pure Joy
Thank you…each and everyone of
Your beautiful gifts of art!
~Mary~

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Below are our selected poems for you to use in today’s challenge!

Please use only words from these poem for your write!

Seasons of Lands of Many Stays

By Mary


Going on A Ways
To A Land Of Many stays
The wind of different blows
As the winter land moans
The thrill of silent coldness
Lingers to a still
A release of snowy freedom
Frozen seasons will
Land of Winter is taken
To a destiny they remain
Arriving to a warm land
And that they call Spring
Flowers bloom readily
The dew of winters past
The shrill steady beauty
Colors in motion taking fast
Land of Spring is taken
To a place of beauty slumber
Arriving to a tempered land
This we call Summer
Thirst for water
Lakes shrieking “fill”
Sizzling over-cast
Basting seasons will
Land taken, lovely to some
Now Land has crisp beauty
It is Autumn

Land breathes life colors
As the leaves beckon to be free
The birds fly south
Long warmth their souls to be
A land of many changes
A land of different ways
I always will be amazed
By the
Seasons of Lands of many
Stays!
MM-2010

Shared This Ride from Dust Till Dawn

By Mary

Chasing thoughts
In a racing mind
unique sensations
Since a child I find
People passing secrets
Then passing looks my way
Hearing whispers speak
Happenings came their way
They were unknown enemies
Out to steal my soul
Spirits directed their mind
I was Ostracized
Was their control
Dreams, a path, a entrance
At night at bed I sleep
Awaken many times
Spirits, threatening my visions keep
Keeping my soul alive
To keep this body shell
Praying to my God
And send them to their hell
Through life I fight these spirits
In my outer and in my sleep
Now I am getting older
Feeling a health defeat
The pain is getting stronger
thoughts racing fast
louder than the past
Knowledge, a disease not a faze
Gives me sense of relief
Of all of the torrid days
Now.. a child… kindred to my soul
Shares this Ride more out of control
I will not dismiss this soul
His will to be HIS LIFE!
I will live to protect him
To guide his mind of strife
be a needed shoulder
Hold him down in violent rage
Share the many tears
The visions, dreams paranoid stage!
our mind-made roller coaster
Pray we both hold on!!
Remember The War is the Lords
Say our prayer
from
Dusk till Dawn!

Mary Margaret! 1995

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Angel on my shoulder be

Oh so trying to beckon thee
lead thy soul one way right
lead-th thee next darkest plight
oh darkest fowl of foul can see
spare this willing seer  plea
place your wings in flight
for seed in souls you see so bright
oh dark one of knowing keep
your eye on me
for thy heart is not mine
and the other shoulder has the key

By Mary
W/Seven Wiz-D-Jon at the CPC
Laila Carlsen the artist  thank you!

We thank you for sharing your time with us

And we hope you enjoyed our challenge!

We look forward to your visit again next month!

With all our regards,

Mary, Barbara and Cherie (Silver Lining)

Please send us your Heart!


263 Comments

  • Barbara_K says:

    Good evening, Jon and Cherie and Cheryl and Mary Margaret and All, and welcome to this month’s Pick-Apart Poetry. Mary Margaret has been a friend for such a wonderfully long time and we’re honored that she is sharing her eloquent and beautiful poetry with us. I’m looking forward to what we all bring back to share.

  • CreativePoetryCorral says:

    Here are the poems once more:
    :love:

    Seasons of Lands of Many Stays
    By Mary

    Going on A Ways
    To A Land Of Many stays
    The wind of different blows
    As the winter land moans
    The thrill of silent coldness
    Lingers to a still
    A release of snowy freedom
    Frozen seasons will
    Land of Winter is taken
    To a destiny they remain
    Arriving to a warm land
    And that they call Spring
    Flowers bloom readily
    The dew of winters past
    The shrill steady beauty
    Colors in motion taking fast
    Land of Spring is taken
    To a place of beauty slumber
    Arriving to a tempered land
    This we call Summer
    Thirst for water
    Lakes shrieking “fill”
    Sizzling over-cast
    Basting seasons will
    Land taken, lovely to some
    Now Land has crisp beauty
    It is Autumn

    Land breathes life colors
    As the leaves beckon to be free
    The birds fly south
    Long warmth their souls to be
    A land of many changes
    A land of different ways
    I always will be amazed
    By the
    Seasons of Lands of many
    Stays!
    MM-2010

    :love:

    Angel on my shoulder be

    Oh so trying to beckon thee
    lead thy soul one way right
    lead-th thee next darkest plight
    oh darkest fowl of foul can see
    spare this willing seer plea
    place your wings in flight
    for seed in souls you see so bright
    oh dark one of knowing keep
    your eye on me
    for thy heart is not mine
    and the other shoulder has the key

    By Mary
    W/Seven Wiz-D-Jon at the CPC
    Laila Carlsen the artist thank you!

    :love:

    Shared This Ride from Dust Till Dawn
    By Mary

    Chasing thoughts
    In a racing mind
    unique sensations
    Since a child I find
    People passing secrets
    Then passing looks my way
    Hearing whispers speak
    Happenings came their way
    They were unknown enemies
    Out to steal my soul
    Spirits directed their mind
    I was Ostracized
    Was their control
    Dreams, a path, a entrance
    At night at bed I sleep
    Awaken many times
    Spirits, threatening my visions keep
    Keeping my soul alive
    To keep this body shell
    Praying to my God
    And send them to their hell
    Through life I fight these spirits
    In my outer and in my sleep
    Now I am getting older
    Feeling a health defeat
    The pain is getting stronger
    thoughts racing fast
    louder than the past
    Knowledge, a disease not a faze
    Gives me sense of relief
    Of all of the torrid days
    Now.. a child… kindred to my soul
    Shares this Ride more out of control
    I will not dismiss this soul
    His will to be HIS LIFE!
    I will live to protect him
    To guide his mind of strife
    be a needed shoulder
    Hold him down in violent rage
    Share the many tears
    The visions, dreams paranoid stage!
    our mind-made roller coaster
    Pray we both hold on!!
    Remember The War is the Lords
    Say our prayer
    from
    Dusk till Dawn!

    Mary Margaret! 1995

  • Mary Margaret says:

    Thank you so much each and everyone of you!!
    A pleasant and high honor to be in Feature here
    Cherie, Barbara and Jon all of you … this so touches
    my heart! As we walk to my beats of different drums!!

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  • Scotorum says:

    Hey three of my most favorite people, Barbara, Cherie and Mary Margaret! So great to see you and to see Mary’s poems featured tonight! In one of them I found this!

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  • LadyCherylDeath says:

    OK Y’all she is all yours *smiling* the Cats kept acting up last night and well lets just say I had a very restless night……. Cheryl needs some beauty rest LMAO 😯

    See you Tomorrow!!! :love: :love: :love:

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  • Barbara_K says:

    Photobucket isn’t in a very cooperative mood tonight, but I won’t let that hold me up:

    SWEET RELEASE

    My heart awakens
    to the flowers that bloom,
    the secrets of their beauty
    released as I slumber
    and dream of flight,
    life beckoning to me
    in whispers warm and free —
    dreaming to be,
    my destiny.

    (c) barbara kausteklis 7-26-11

  • Silver says:

    Have a busy day tomorrow….will see you in the morning…..HUGS to all…….. :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

  • Bettie says:

    GIVE ME RELIEF

    Dusk till dawn
    Say our prayer
    Vision
    Dreams
    Share the many tears
    The pain is getting stronger
    Now I am getting older
    Keeping my soul alive

    Written By: Bettie Davis ————————- (C) July 26 , 2o11

  • Bettie says:

    THE KEY

    Souls beckon thee
    Darkest plight
    You see so bright
    Knowing keep
    Thy heart is not mine
    Wings in flight
    Fowl of foul
    Should had the key

    Written By: Bettie Davis ——————————————- (C) July 26 , 2o11

  • Bettie says:

    LANDS OF MANY

    Colors
    Season of lands
    The birds fly south
    Long warmth their souls
    Many changes
    Will be amazed
    Sizzlin over cast
    Now land has crisp beauty

    Written By: Bettie Davis ———————————— (C) July 26 , 2o11

  • Bettie says:

    MANY LANDS

    Lands of many
    Other shoulds had the key
    Oh dark one of knowing keep
    Goin on a ways
    To a land of different blows
    Lingers to a still

    Written By: Bettie Davis ———————————————— (C) July 26 , 2o11

  • mrobinking says:

    Hello everyone.. here is what I came up with!

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  • mrobinking says:

    All wonderful Pick-apart-poems tonight! Kudos to all!

  • Barbara_K says:

    Good Night, All, and rest well. See you again over coffee in the morning. Thanks so much for sharing your hearts and your smiles and your beautiful words and images tonight. Big Hugs. ~barb~

  • Valentime_Smith says:

    “Winter Land”

    winter land
    moans
    of silent
    coldness
    Frozen seasons
    chasing
    thoughts passing
    secrets
    steal a
    path
    my soul
    chasing
    thoughts in
    Praying
    shrill steady
    beauty … tempered

    INSPIRED BY MARY MARGRET
    & DORI WHEELER

  • Mary Margaret says:

    good morning all of you here is mine hug’s :love: :love:


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  • Mary Margaret says:

    You know I love you! Hug’s B!!!!! xoxooxoxoxox I love this song hug’s!!! This earth you see so beautiful!! Hug’s


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  • doriwheeler says:

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    WHISPERS…

    I am hearing
    whispers in the night,
    I sense a spirit.
    Dreams and visions,
    were they of
    the past?
    Were they visions
    of child spirits?
    Dreams of the past?
    The child soul
    whispers to me
    I sense his spirit.
    These visions,
    I dream,
    of the past
    and sense his
    child soul
    guide me
    to knowledge,
    and whispers….

    DORI 7.27.11

  • awesomemelodies says:

    I’m still not sure how it all works over here but wanted to shre with you all hope this is right!! warm Smiles and Hugs :love:

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  • awesomemelodies says:

    I don’t know why my words aren’t showing on the picture so I guess I’ll just re-write it without the picture:

    Secret winds blow
    As dreams sleep
    Colors breathe beauty
    Roller coaster thoughts
    Warm tears racing fast
    Prayer a kindred to my soul
    Feeling relief, I’m amazed

    (c) Sheila A Berlier 07/27/11

  • angel11 says:

    She closes her eyes to stop the tears,
    without you its life she fears.

    All the pain your putting her through,
    she can’t face life living without you.
    Cutting her arms and hoping to die,

    trying to forget when you said goodbye.
    Never thinking it would end like this,

    never forgetting the first time u kissed.

    She never thought her love would grow,
    trying to cover it so u wouldn’t no.
    Thinking of memories inside her head,

    replaying them words that you once said.
    Wishing you loved her, that it was her again,

    eager to cut through that one vein.
    Tears rolling down her face as the

    blood begins to appear as the pain begins to take place.
    She knows that she cant have you,

    she knows that you’ve moved on,
    but how can she still live,

    when she knows that you’re the one.
    She thinks of you, the good times too and hopes you’ll understand.

    Her final breath, the sound of the knife all because you left her life

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  • justmenow says:

    To my lovely friend..Mary..Thank You for all your words of encouragment and for the beautiful writes. You truly are an Angel :love:
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  • justmenow says:

    Thank You All..now I must rest :love: :love: :love: To all of you!

  • Silver says:

    Thanx to the beautiful poet that shared her heart here on
    this summer pic-apart Wednesday,,,so love you Mary……[img]Ani-Heart Pictures, Images and Photos

  • Barbara_K says:

    Thanks so much to everyone for helping to make this such a wonderful “Pick-Apart” experience. Thanks again to Mary Margaret for sharing her beautiful poetry with us and for always being such an encouraging friend and participant and to Jon and Cheryl for all their help and to Cherie for being such an awesome and amazing co-host. Giant Hugs to All! And feel free to continue sharing your “Pick-Aparts”. We’ll be checking back. ~barb~

  • Silver says:

    Barbara…..you are an awesome hostess…….

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  • Mary Margaret says:

    Cherie a awesome Hostess.. don’tcha know!!! hug’s sweetkinns!! :love: :love: :love: :love:

  • awesomemelodies says:

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    I appreciate All of you wonderful people here. YOU are SPECIAL !! I love how you share such encouragement and love and Touch hearts too!! So to thank you from the bottom of my heart!! I send this Photo Bouquet from me to you!!

    Lots of Warm Smiles :mrgreen: warm Hugs and LOve :love: Sheila A

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