TREASURED STILL (A Friday Fling Toy-Time Triolet Duet)

A “Friday Fling” toy-time triolet duet:


TREASURED STILL

Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.
I still think that they’re the best,
upon a shelf my toys still nest.
We play each day and hardly rest,
sweet paper dolls and trucks and cranes.
Upon a shelf my toys still nest,
my favorite bears and paper planes.

Childhood treasures cherished and loved,
no matter that they’re tattered and worn;
We still get together and have fun every day,
childhood treasures cherished and loved.
My favorite bears and paper planes,
playing dress-up even if clothes are torn;
childhood treasures cherished and loved
no matter that they’re tattered and worn.

(c) barbara kausteklis 3-9-12

Written for CPC “Friday Fling/
The Friday Fling Plays Poetically With Our Favorite Toys

http://www.friendburst.com/blog/83458/friday-fling-plays-poetically-favorite-toys/

According to ShadowPoetry.com:

“A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines.

Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat,

and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well.

The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB,

capital letters representing the repeated lines.”

I never do find the “forms” simple but do at least enjoy trying them.

Thanks always for your visits and comments.

Big Hugs.

~barb~

14 Comments

  • Angel Love says:

    Wonderful double triolet, Barbara! :love: :love:

  • IAMRCx says:

    Avery nice write. It takes me back. I do not have any of the toys from my childhood…but I carry the memories of what I did have forever in my mind. Enjoyed this. :love:

  • Bettie says:

    Beautifully written as always girlfriend great memories here and to still have your toys is an extra … Hugs Now

  • INKY says:

    BEAUTIFULY DONE BARBARA LOV AND HUGS INKY

  • Jean_S says:

    Wonderful write and presentation Barbara. God bless.

  • jencat says:

    Aw i love this one i loved my paper Dolls so much well and all of my Barbies i love your poems so much Barbara :love:

  • Mary Margaret says:

    this is for real like a picture.. I love teddies

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