WITHIN THE MOMENT (with photos) CPC “Pick-Apart” Piece
WITHIN THE MOMENT
In the solitude
of the hour
I hear the wind
whistling
through the window,
sunlight fading,
the rain creeping closer,
cautious and uncertain,
as it silently
touches my face.
of the hour
I hear the wind
whistling
through the window,
sunlight fading,
the rain creeping closer,
cautious and uncertain,
as it silently
touches my face.
(c) barbara kausteklis 7-24-12
Written for “Pick-Apart Poetry”
this month featuring two short
pieces by Rainer Maria Rilke.
this month featuring two short
pieces by Rainer Maria Rilke.
http://www.friendburst.com/blog/93381/93381/
The idea of “Pick-Apart Poetry”
is to select 25 words from the pieces posted
in the challenge and to create a new piece
using only those selected words. Words
may be used more than once and tenses
may be changed. It’s always a fun monthly
challenge for me and this piece is what
resulted from the words I selected.
Thanks always for your visits and precious comments
and I hope this week is a peaceful one for you.
Big Hugs.
~barb~
Link to previous couple of pieces posted over on MySpace:
WITHIN THE GLOW
(A Nonet/PicPoem)
(A Nonet/PicPoem)
http://www.myspace.com/578362805/blog/546047763
SUMMERTIME SUNFLOWER GOLDEN
(with photos)
:love: Wonderful. As always you never cease to amaze me.
i love those moments awsome poetry barbara lov and hugs inky