OUT OF MY HEAD

My very first attempt at writtin a BlogOPHILIA hope I got it at lease half right if not ya just know ill try again ….

mouths on eyeballs

Blogophilia 11.4 – Topic: The State Of Insanity

Bonus Points:
(Hard, 2pts): mention 1 of the 5 Great Lakes (Superior, Michigan, Huron, Erie and Ontario)
(Easy, 1pt): incorporate “moxie” in your blog
 
Picture guess insane illusions … optical … Anamorphosis

OUT OF MY HEAD

All the above I became
Insane when every thing went wrong
Um havin this party see
I am the to host
But I have no music right
My girlfriend
Is runnin every where lookin for me
I am runnin every where
Tryin ta fine
This band um suppose ta have
So my girlfriend catchs up to me
The stage is set
And your up
I cant find the band
Not even the guy thats suppose the be co-hostin wit me
So I go on alone
Sayin to myself
It will be fine
All I gotta do is show up right
Yet I fine meself in this illusion of a dream that
Some one will finally show up wit the music
I am late for my own party as is
People talkin to me
And um not ever there
My two sister of corse cause they know um comin
So they satrt the party as if I was there
People still comin in
I greet my guess finily
And I didnt have the moxie
Nor the courage
To ask any one else
So sure that my
Band would show up
Never did show
Um so upset now
And where the heck is he
Some where
On da other side of
Michigan Huron lake some where
Might have been
Ontario bridge
Any ways
When and if I fine him
Um gonna kick his butt on da other side of
Lake Erie
And back to Ontario
He had theinitiative nerve
Ta stand me up like that
But I cept my spisit high that night
And all went well
My sister and I just had a ball
For one brouth the music
The other bought the laughter
And I handly the guess
So all in all it waz just a blast

Written By: Bettie Davis —————————————— (C) May 17 , 2o11

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10 Comments

  • Jean_S says:

    Great write sis…Love ya!!!

  • Suzanne says:

    Wonderful!

  • INKY says:

    lol bettie i think you got it fine,, aswome love and hugs inky :entertained:

  • di710smiles says:

    1st you know I will try again added smiles Positive :love: ..Blog as party was great and interesting :entertained: ..Love the ending for party you did even without him Made it :mrgreen: :love: ..Picture on bottom WoW :love:

  • Mary Margaret says:

    OMG this is primo… love it :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

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