A PROMISE BROKEN

Second try thou all my stuff again may not come wit write but here goes ……………….

Blogophilia 12.4 Topic: “Between My Heart and the Moon”

Bonus Points:

(Hard, 2pts): include a caftan and a broken promise

(Easy, 1pt): mention Moonshine and a Hawaiian pizza

Final date to post: May 24th, 2011 GMT midnight

Final date to post ALL GUESSES: May 21st, 2011 GMT midnight

A PROMIE BROKEN

http://youtu.be/4N_8iRmM4JM

My heart in full

As on a moon light night

Moonshine as day light

I feel it pump in with

The joy of love

For you

Guess it much have just been

The moonshine

That I just drank

Cause I

Can just feel

Broken promises

On the way

Broken promises

You said

You would never brake

Yet as I awake

To a new day

There is no you to be seen

Yet between my heart

And the moon

There sits

A mouth watering

Hawaiian pizza

All ready

To take away

The sadness that I may feel

If even for a little while

As I enjoy

And the

Moonshine

Leaves my head thobbin

Cafton

And broken promises

On a moonshine night at bay

Hawaiian pizza

To make my day

And leave my burning soul to pay

Written By: Bettie Davis ————————————– © May 17 , 2o11

6 Comments

  • Jean_S says:

    Great writs sis!!! Yoou need to watch that there moonshine…that stuff’ll kill ya…lol

  • dustup224152 says:

    Very well done Bettie! :love:

    I especially like your use of the music video choices as accompaniments for all different types of readers/listeners…something for everyone. (I chose the Tracy Chapman song—it really sets the mood for your two pieces :love: )

  • Mary Margaret says:

    man i love the selections to go with it sweetie clapping :love: :love:

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