THE DEATH OF A FRIEND
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THE DEATH OF A FRIEND
When you have know someone
For a time
Share a Blog are two
May be four are five then
In a helpful way
They are there for you in many ways
You talk and are post together
Share party Blogs pictures and such
You know of their ups and downs
Never even meet face to face
Just a phone call are two
Heard their voice
Share their pain
Some times a tear
Just because you talk as friends
Many many things goes into a friendship
Even with out seeing them
Its like you grow a bone are some thing
From a long distance
It touch your heart in some way unknown to other
Again I have lost a friendship
Only this time its real
Well as real as it comes
My dearest sister and friend
Brenda Pind aka Patches
From Flex Writers Cafe
MySpace
Reflection Writer
Dream Door
And any other Blogs we were at one time and are another
We became close
She was a great friend to have
Yeah um writing of death yet again
Have not seen the obituary yet
Nor has it been posted
Just on her page
Her daughters as far as I know any ways
But this time um sure its true
For two lies never makes a right
But if this is wrong
I shall as did before
Change my write to correct it like before
As all know by now I but always write my feeling out
And yea um feeling this pain yet again
For the lost of someone dear to me
Why do these things keep happening
I know people gotta die and all
But when its someone you know
And are a family member
Thats the heart breaker of all
Almost to much to bare
Any way said that to add this
Yesterday her daughter JoyMyShell
Thats the name her mother and I call her by
Came to me
Askin a favor of me
And I waz so willing to do it
Just to ease her pain what little I could
But I fail her
We talked for the longest time
But I could not get over the fact that not long ago now
That a similar thing kinda like this is a way
Joy (sweet pea)
May are may not have know
Bout this other so called at that time friend of mine had I thought
And a lots of other had die but true out ta be fault
I waz not bout ta go though this again
So there fore you could say
I lost two friend at the same time
Patches dies
And her daughter deleted me
For she waz upset and thought I was being mean
Because I waz in my eyes
Trying to protect her mother good name and mine
And be caught up in a lie maybe
As before
And that hurts to
So um just losing
Friend left and right
Where do we go wrong Id like to know
And why does that death of someone so close have to hurt so bad
Written By: Bettie Davis ——————————— © May 24 , 2o11
I am so sorry Bettie. I knew she was at death’s door from what everyone was saying. My heart goes out to everyone who has lost yet another friend… Death has been knocking often lately. Love you Sis . (((hugs )))
bettie i too liked patches,, she was an amazing writer i miss her too i once worte someting for her,, i will leave it here so she too can remember,, so sorry bettie perhaps when her daughtre isnt greiving so she will understand and return to say thank you for the love you showed her mom and her family,, big hugs here is the little write
EMBERS ALL AGLOW
visiting with Patches…
The fire spirit flutter gently upon the hearth,
a gentle passing breeze kisses,
strings of the harp,
make merry have joy,
Christmas presents
for children,
the girl and the boy,
toast a small cheer,
gather the friends
we have dear,
today is Christmas,
let us wish cheer
for the coming year.
the fire flutters low,
embers all aglow,
as people shake hands,
sad to see them go.
You watch then go,
into , the frosted snow.
It crunches ,
as you close
the door,
reaching for your chocolate,
and just one
sip more.