Here’s one I wrote just this morning for Jean S. while I was finishing up creating this blog. My poem fits the theme here too, and it will help to jump start the creative flow.
Jon
On occasion I do PICn Poems for friends…….. I ran across this poem a long time ago by a friend and Just had to PIC it for her!!! One of my early PIC’ns *smiling*
I feel this is a dark write..Ones feel lost when ones leave yet, in time you have to find your own happiness within yourself..Life is beautiful Full of love :love:
Sweet Dreams … Not enough hours in a day~ Thank the Good Lord for the energy :)..in heart LoveYouAre..Thank each of you..Will be back as can So, grateful to all..Smiles with love, shared
The way my life
Is to day
It seems as
Everything is falling apart
The more that I do
More needs doing
No one seems
To think That I need
A days rest
Everything is me
Cookin cleanin carin doing no stoppin
Every turn is mine
When days end come
Um to tire to sleep
Just toss and turn
Till day break come
To hot to rest
Even wit the air on
Me and my hot flashes gotta run
Hollow all day
Then night
Every body lookin at me
When will it all end
My house of cards is so fallin down
And um wonderin will I be next
Tire tire
Oh where is the rest
My poor body is fragile
Yet I keep going
summer pictures\\
In the cold dreary night I was watching ellipse the twilight saga .
I’ve seen it several times and it always gets my mind boggled .
When he brakes her heart it feels a emptiness inside mine.
For the pain of losing my love still reins in time.
I remember the hurt .
My body crawled up like a fetus.
The tears coming pouring through the fast river of dirt.
I clenched my heart so tight it hurt.
I was numbed for months.
The pain so real still this day it sink my soul inside.
A black hole remains to still die.
Its been months now and I give life one hell of try.
But that brief moment my world clasped I became lost forever.
True love is hard to find hold tight ole so tight.
I feel stuck in a prison in this house.
To afraid to move out.
Afraid of losing all I have.
I feel sad cause I cant take a chance to step out and change.
Its rains tears after tears .
Sleeping beauty I have become.
I have become numb inside my soul.
Sitting here watching the year fly by.
Losing site of me I cant fly.
Depression has come into site.
It has left me blinded by the day and night.
I can hear my soul begging for the light.
But I have been captured by the darkness in my mind.
My spirit feels so cold.
And I am getting to old.
Chances are slim for me.
So I am told.
I’m scared of the sorrow deep inside of me.
For it has hinder all I should be.
All I can do is barely breath life into me.
I wind my self up just to see the darkness breath.
I wake up to a dead soul.
I watch my life unfold.
Into the darkness it goes.
In life we try , but not everything turns out all right.
No matter the love behind the known.
And if I could dream of the day going away.
Id would just sleep and forget about my sad songs ways.
I am sleeping in a bed of fire my heart has issues .
I am feeling so midnight dark blue .
I tasted the lover’s magic.
Now my soul has become numb.
With in these four lonely walls he does not come.
He is stuck on his own selfish run.
And in my life there is no fun.
Silent Tears run on a race.
Today the fright rises and the fears paralyzes my mind.
The dark soul hovers over me begging to come back into the dark side of me.
The storm will soon start to grow.
Issues of not knowing if not to let go.
Forever building bridges in my spirit.
But none strong enough to sustain the light in me.
I am growing to a place where things I must set free.
But where I start only heaven knows.
Shadows in my heart watching over me.
I am broken in 1000 pieces .
And my world is being tore apart.
Everything I know to be real fades within the dark.
I am left standing on my own heart.
Brought down on my knees going through hell for thee.
Love should not hurt so deep.
Promises broken ,thorns make me bleed.
My shadows in my heart cry out to thee.
Heaven will not open up for me.
I’m left standing in a lover’s broken sea.
The tides so fierce and ragging I can’t see.
I am drowning in my own sorrow of to be.
I am left caring for me.
Trying to get back on my own feet.
But this limbos got me caught in the tides.
Within this strife I watch my thoughts drain out and die.
I feel like I am already gone from him.
But then I see his smile and I come back again.
This lover’s roller coaster feels like a sin.
And I know it will never win.
But my heart wont change .
I have had enough I feel like I am already gone.
But the truth is my heart continues to hold onto his emptiness .
Praying for something more.
touched this world gently
not quite 2 lbs 3
road the waves of uncertainty
and followed their own way
grew tough, so noting could
penatrate the shell
little did they know
their cutting words
hurt like hell
perhaps the lable should have read
use no hooks
handle with care
contents
fragile and rare
Please handle with care
this heart of mine,
for it hasn’t, you see,
hardened at all over time
and it is rather fragile,
this heart of mine.
Please handle it with care,
this heart of mine,
for over the years,
though my defenses
have come down
just a tiny bit,
I’ve just begun to share
the feelings and thoughts
buried so far within.
For I’ve managed to keep them
quite under wraps
while protecting them there
and just every once in a while
opening up a little bit
to share what’s in there.
So this heart of mine,
for a long time silent and still
begins to emerge and to share
what’s been put away
for a very long time
and reserved for
such times as this
and among friends
who truly care.
Hello Diane and Jon one from a few years ago, a saga bout my first real love
Basketball thats all
Reflecting back on my younger days
when all I did was played
At the play ground under the hot sun
my shadow and I gettin it on
one on one we would go
practice moves to put on someone for sure
Game time up and down that court
sweat beaming who wanted the game the most
The touch the feel soft hands my basketball appeal
Playin hard roughen for position
Its my neighborhood I am representen
The drive the scoop the dip the snatch
basketball games back to back
In order to stay you had to play
for five more guys waitin to have their say
Got to win with that spin play some defense
make it intense
Basketball always with me as we ride
looking for games and victory
Loved it so much never knew
I was poor
Grab my basketball out the door
yellin more more more
Thank you Each of you for being here..Know Jon did this one but, I too, would like you Thank you each of you for True inspiring ink, shared..Many deep, heartfelt writes..in heart Remember Give self a hug feeling warmth within for LoveYouAre~..See you all next week Thematic Attic rocks because of you :love: :love: :love: :love:
Got back late from a business trip Thursday night, exhausted I fell asleep before I could get here, but it looks like we had some wonderful poetry going on! I want to thank everyone who came by and participated. I thank you for taking that extra step and digging into such an emotional realm of subject and theme. We try our best to be creative and challenging with our poetry blogs and hope you enjoyed your visit here!
I’ll be taking the morning and commenting back on your writes!
All my regards,
Jon :love: :groovy: :love:
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Hello Jon & Diane!!! I so look forward to the writes that are to come!!!
Leaving a heart for now…may be back later 🙂
Here’s one I wrote just this morning for Jean S. while I was finishing up creating this blog. My poem fits the theme here too, and it will help to jump start the creative flow.
Jon
With my heart and soul
I have opened up to you
and to you only.
Your Spirit calls me
without mercy I am drawn
your essence fills me.
I am overwhelmed
lost in the ocean of love
found with your arms.
This was from a 5 word poetry challenge………..
I heart this theme Diane and Jon!
On occasion I do PICn Poems for friends…….. I ran across this poem a long time ago by a friend and Just had to PIC it for her!!! One of my early PIC’ns *smiling*
I feel this is a dark write..Ones feel lost when ones leave yet, in time you have to find your own happiness within yourself..Life is beautiful Full of love :love:
Too tired to do a PnP 😆
:love:
I used to think it mattered
I actually used to care
Your actions used to hurt me
But still I had a prayer.
That prayer has turned to blessings
Which come from up above
No longer do I yearn
To share with you my love.
For now I know you are incapable
Of loving any other
I wonder if you ever loved
Even your dear mother.
All you do is use people
Whenever it suits your fancy
But I am through being hurt by you
I’d rather go out dancing.
My love has turned to pity
For I know there is much more
When the time comes for you to transition
You will have so much in store.
You never learned your lesson
I wish you better luck next time
Living with love in your heart
Is the only mountain to climb.
So now I say goodbye to you
It is time to journey on
I hope you learn to live with love
Before your time is gone.
(c) Angel Love, June 8, 2011
I love this song and found this copy from a amiture ~ what a great voice!!!
Here is an oldie..I used to sing when I was young..Oops showing my age lol
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Sweet Dreams … Not enough hours in a day~ Thank the Good Lord for the energy :)..in heart LoveYouAre..Thank each of you..Will be back as can So, grateful to all..Smiles with love, shared
Such a relevant theme on so many levels. Compelling theme and blog. Always wonderful poetry and posts.
Thank you @A-Rhodi for Including “Fragile” by Jamie Slocum in this Poetry blog. 😀
Across The Miles in Rhyme
The potential start of something new
a bond that’s shared between me and you
Love that surpasses any known to man
transcends through us no matter where we stand
flowing freely making life magical
heart and soul connecting – truly unconditional.
Many times we worry and too often cry
forgetting we’re under God’s all watchful eye
the times we share strengthen and renew
multidimensional from friendship it grew
on a special journey both me and you
to share, learn and teach in all we do
obligations may lead us in different directions
but our thoughts can take us to our favorite locations.
May your health be at it’s best
your heart at rest
your voice filled with laughter
that nothing human can shatter
May the heavens fill your life with love
out-shining all that’s past
May you have unending blessings
that have never been surpassed
May the Spirit fill your soul
and inspiration always flow
that others may have a chance to share
the Grace you’ve come to know
In Love & Light a Blessing I’m sending
Unconditional love that’s never-ending.
~April~© May 2011
HOUSE OF CARDS
The way my life
Is to day
It seems as
Everything is falling apart
The more that I do
More needs doing
No one seems
To think That I need
A days rest
Everything is me
Cookin cleanin carin doing no stoppin
Every turn is mine
When days end come
Um to tire to sleep
Just toss and turn
Till day break come
To hot to rest
Even wit the air on
Me and my hot flashes gotta run
Hollow all day
Then night
Every body lookin at me
When will it all end
My house of cards is so fallin down
And um wonderin will I be next
Tire tire
Oh where is the rest
My poor body is fragile
Yet I keep going
Written By: Bettie Davis ——————————————– © June o8 , 2o11
In the cold dreary night I was watching ellipse the twilight saga .
I’ve seen it several times and it always gets my mind boggled .
When he brakes her heart it feels a emptiness inside mine.
For the pain of losing my love still reins in time.
I remember the hurt .
My body crawled up like a fetus.
The tears coming pouring through the fast river of dirt.
I clenched my heart so tight it hurt.
I was numbed for months.
The pain so real still this day it sink my soul inside.
A black hole remains to still die.
Its been months now and I give life one hell of try.
But that brief moment my world clasped I became lost forever.
True love is hard to find hold tight ole so tight.
I feel stuck in a prison in this house.
To afraid to move out.
Afraid of losing all I have.
I feel sad cause I cant take a chance to step out and change.
Its rains tears after tears .
Sleeping beauty I have become.
I have become numb inside my soul.
Sitting here watching the year fly by.
Losing site of me I cant fly.
Depression has come into site.
It has left me blinded by the day and night.
I can hear my soul begging for the light.
But I have been captured by the darkness in my mind.
My spirit feels so cold.
And I am getting to old.
Chances are slim for me.
So I am told.
I’m scared of the sorrow deep inside of me.
For it has hinder all I should be.
All I can do is barely breath life into me.
I wind my self up just to see the darkness breath.
I wake up to a dead soul.
I watch my life unfold.
Into the darkness it goes.
In life we try , but not everything turns out all right.
No matter the love behind the known.
And if I could dream of the day going away.
Id would just sleep and forget about my sad songs ways.
I am sleeping in a bed of fire my heart has issues .
I am feeling so midnight dark blue .
I tasted the lover’s magic.
Now my soul has become numb.
With in these four lonely walls he does not come.
He is stuck on his own selfish run.
And in my life there is no fun.
Silent Tears run on a race.
Today the fright rises and the fears paralyzes my mind.
The dark soul hovers over me begging to come back into the dark side of me.
The storm will soon start to grow.
Issues of not knowing if not to let go.
Forever building bridges in my spirit.
But none strong enough to sustain the light in me.
I am growing to a place where things I must set free.
But where I start only heaven knows.
Shadows in my heart watching over me.
I am broken in 1000 pieces .
And my world is being tore apart.
Everything I know to be real fades within the dark.
I am left standing on my own heart.
Brought down on my knees going through hell for thee.
Love should not hurt so deep.
Promises broken ,thorns make me bleed.
My shadows in my heart cry out to thee.
Heaven will not open up for me.
I’m left standing in a lover’s broken sea.
The tides so fierce and ragging I can’t see.
I am drowning in my own sorrow of to be.
I am left caring for me.
Trying to get back on my own feet.
But this limbos got me caught in the tides.
Within this strife I watch my thoughts drain out and die.
I feel like I am already gone from him.
But then I see his smile and I come back again.
This lover’s roller coaster feels like a sin.
And I know it will never win.
But my heart wont change .
I have had enough I feel like I am already gone.
But the truth is my heart continues to hold onto his emptiness .
Praying for something more.
Just a little something for the cause….
Have a great day everyone.
CONTENTS RARE, HANDLE WITH CARE
touched this world gently
not quite 2 lbs 3
road the waves of uncertainty
and followed their own way
grew tough, so noting could
penatrate the shell
little did they know
their cutting words
hurt like hell
perhaps the lable should have read
use no hooks
handle with care
contents
fragile and rare
HEART SO FRAGILE
Please by cautious, heart so fragile
It’s been this way for awhile
That fateful day, you were gone
Heaven is now where you belong
I had no clue it would hurt this much
How I miss your tender touch
At least you knew how much I care
Now I’m left with an empty stare
Missing you now everyday
My fragile heart is the price I pay!
DORI {09JUNE11}
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PLEASE HANDLE WITH CARE
Please handle with care
this heart of mine,
for it hasn’t, you see,
hardened at all over time
and it is rather fragile,
this heart of mine.
Please handle it with care,
this heart of mine,
for over the years,
though my defenses
have come down
just a tiny bit,
I’ve just begun to share
the feelings and thoughts
buried so far within.
For I’ve managed to keep them
quite under wraps
while protecting them there
and just every once in a while
opening up a little bit
to share what’s in there.
So this heart of mine,
for a long time silent and still
begins to emerge and to share
what’s been put away
for a very long time
and reserved for
such times as this
and among friends
who truly care.
(c) barbara kausteklis 1-11-11
Hello Diane and Jon one from a few years ago, a saga bout my first real love
Basketball thats all
Reflecting back on my younger days
when all I did was played
At the play ground under the hot sun
my shadow and I gettin it on
one on one we would go
practice moves to put on someone for sure
Game time up and down that court
sweat beaming who wanted the game the most
The touch the feel soft hands my basketball appeal
Playin hard roughen for position
Its my neighborhood I am representen
The drive the scoop the dip the snatch
basketball games back to back
In order to stay you had to play
for five more guys waitin to have their say
Got to win with that spin play some defense
make it intense
Basketball always with me as we ride
looking for games and victory
Loved it so much never knew
I was poor
Grab my basketball out the door
yellin more more more
Thank you Each of you for being here..Know Jon did this one but, I too, would like you Thank you each of you for True inspiring ink, shared..Many deep, heartfelt writes..in heart Remember Give self a hug feeling warmth within for LoveYouAre~..See you all next week Thematic Attic rocks because of you :love: :love:
Just got caught up with all the great writes…kudos with thumbs up left for all! :love:
Got back late from a business trip Thursday night, exhausted I fell asleep before I could get here, but it looks like we had some wonderful poetry going on! I want to thank everyone who came by and participated. I thank you for taking that extra step and digging into such an emotional realm of subject and theme. We try our best to be creative and challenging with our poetry blogs and hope you enjoyed your visit here!
I’ll be taking the morning and commenting back on your writes!
All my regards,
Jon :love: :groovy: :love: