ESCAPE — CPC “Pick-Apart Poetry” Featuring Voo’s Poetry
My “Pick-Apart Poem” created
from 25 words selected from
Voo’s featured poem “Forgiveness.”
from 25 words selected from
Voo’s featured poem “Forgiveness.”
Thanks to Voo for sharing her talent
with us at “Pick Apart” this month.
ESCAPE
Escaping these bars,
these walls,
the darkness holding me;
that have made me
a prisoner of emotions,
a prisoner of me,
and into the freedom
beyond myself,
free from tears
and captivity,
freed from solitude
and sorrow,
and walking unbroken
into the light.
(c) barbara kausteklis 6-28-11
Written for CPC “Pick-Apart Poetry”
Featuring Voo’s Poem “Forgiveness.
“Pick-Apart Poetry” is created
by selecting 25 words from the posted
original piece and then creating a new piece
using only those 25 words. Words may be
repeated and tenses may be changed.
To read Voo’s original piece
and pieces created from her words
and also to try one of your own,
please follow the link.
I’m co-hosting with Silver Lining (Cherie)
and A-Rhodi tonight and through tomorrow
and it is open right now.
Thanks always for your visits and comments.
~barb~
Marvelous write Barbara. I can’t get into these…I tried the lines and that didn’t work for me either… But I love your work. God bless.
Marvelous write Barbara. I can’t get into these…I tried the lines and that didn’t work for me either… But I love your work…. God bless.
I really love this! You are so talented! :love:
Barbara, thanks for accepting my friend request. I believe I read this on MySpace, but I wanted to experiment with commenting here. I indeed love what you did with this challenge.
:love:
Wonderful job Barbara!