SEEKING — CPC “Pick-Apart” Poetry (a second piece)
Since I’ve always found the “Pick-Aparts”
such a fascinating challenge
and so much more difficult for me
than I ever thought they would be,
I can hardly ever resist trying a second one.
My Second “Pick-Apart Poem” created
from 25 words selected from
Voo’s featured poem “Forgiveness.”
Thanks again to Voo for sharing her talent
with us at “Pick Apart” this month.
SEEKING Piercing like glass,
emotions stolen,
a caged prisoner
beyond crushed
I seek unbroken clarity,
a light that will free me
from this captivity
of unending solitude.
(c) barbara kausteklis 6-28-11
Written for CPC “Pick-Apart Poetry”
Featuring Voo’s Poem “Forgiveness”.
“Pick-Apart Poetry” is created
by selecting 25 words from the posted
original piece and then creating a new piece
using only those 25 words. Words may be
repeated and tenses may be changed.
To read Voo’s original piece
and pieces created from her words
and also to try one of your own,
please follow the link.
Co-hosting with Silver Lining (Cherie)
and A-Rhodi last night
and through the rest of today.
Thanks always for your visits and comments.
~barb~
Marvelous short Barbara!!!
wonderful!!
Another beauty, Barbara!!! And thank you for all your wonderful words and praise for my work. I am just so touched.
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great work barbara well done love and hugs inky
Barbara reached over and touched The Dark Side. Shows your versatility! Very well done. xo
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