The Wonders Of You @Pick-Apart Poetry Featuring “Bettie”
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Welcome to Pick Apart Poetry!
Please send your greetings to our featured guest poet
“Bettie”
Bettie has been so kind to send us a poem for our Challenge!
Please take a moment to visit her profile and send her a
Friend request If you have not already done so!
http://www.friendburst.com/Bettie/
Here is our poem for today’s Challenge:
YOU ARE THE WONDER OF ME
Off in a distant
I could see your light
So far far away from me
Where had our love gone
I do not know
If only I could just see you face
The wonder of you
I welcome you to my world
And you dont even have to say you love me
With hungry eyes I look at you
Holdin some one else so close to night
You are havin the time the time of you life
And it just takes my breath away
Knowin it not me that you are holdin
Cant you just be my baby to night
Every thing you want
Ill do it for you
Be my baby
Be my one and only love
Every time I think
Of the first time
I meet you
You were the only one
I wanna to love
Why cany it be me
The one that you love
Oh the heartaches
I do feel
Just konwin
Some one
Is there with you and its not me
Oh lonely night I do spent
With no one but you on my mind
I am here when ever
You need that friend to hold
I will always make
Every thing
Be alright
You can push me away
But I want go very far away
Just out f site
Just over here
Eight hundred mile away
All you gotta do is call
I will help you though what it is
You need me to by I will be
I will be your friend
For the rest of our lives
If thats what you want of me
But I could be more
You just say the words
For you are
You are the wonders of me
I will never go away
Where ever you are Ill be just over there
Not to far to fine
Just call my name
I am bleedin love for you
And god only sent me an angle
When he send me you
So take a bow
You win
But I will still be here
When ever you need me
For you are
You are the wonders of me
Written By: Bettie Davis —————————————————– © September 13 , 2o11
Welcome to a new “Pick-Apart” Poetry. What an honor to be featuring Bettie and her eloquent poetry this month. Thanks to Jon and Cherie and Cheryl and I so very much look forward to your “Pick-Aparts.” Big Hugs to All! ~barb~
Hello….Hello….How wonderful to have Bettie as out STAR!!!!!!!! Sorry so late…busy day!!!!! Hi Barbara!!!!!
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konwin my hungry baby
You are bleedin
it takes my breath away
Every thing will Be alright
I am holdin Some cany
want some more?
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All you gotta do is call
When ever you need me
Just one night With you
And
F you
go away, by by
Love Konwin
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TAKEN FROM
Just out f site
You just say the words
But I want go very far away
Be my one and only love
Just konwin
With no one but you on my mind
You need me to by I will be
Just call my name
Cant you just be my baby to night
And you dont even have to say you love me
Third Graders waiting for me in the morning…..thank you Barbara and Bettie and Jon…see you tomorrow!!!!
HUGS………… :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:
MY errors in these lines hope no one else notice I goof !!!!!!! Sorry !!!! Yup leave it to me ta fine my own mis happs …
If only I could just see you face
You are havin the time the time of you life
Why cany it be me
Just out f site
You need me to by I will be
Written By: Bettie Davis ————————————– © October 25 , 2o11
push push push
I am bleedin
so close to havin baby
push push push
Just need it out
push push push
You are the wonders of me
You have me bleedin’
with heartaches
You push me away
when I want you to stay
You are no friend of mine
just go away
Distant light
If only I could just see
So close to night
Every thing you want
Why cany it be me
That your lookin for
Oh where is the love
You can push me away
But away I will not go
Cant you but see
I need you
I want you
And you dont even have to love me
Just be my baby tonight
Written By: Bettie Davis ————— © October 26 , 2o11
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God sent me an angle
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Konwin Is there with you
If only I could just see you face
Where had our love gone
Konwin will never go away
it just takes my breath away
it not me that you are holdin
Ill do it for you Oh lonely night
I am bleedin, bleedin
by by baby
MORE THAN JUST FRIENDS
Somewhere between
here and there,
whenever and wherever
you need me
I’ll be there and
holding on
to the wonder
that is you.
I knew when I heard
the words you said —
I knew all the time
we’d be more
than just friends.
(c) barbara kausteklis 10-25-11
It’s getting late even here in Southern California. Wishing you sweet dreams as I look forward to catching up with my precious friends here over coffee in the morning. Thanks for sharing your words and your smiles with us tonight. Big Hugs. ~barb~
Well I am a bit tire and I have ta git Jessica outta her chair and into bed so Ill check back tomorrow … Love to all and have a great nite/morn ….
Greetings and Good Morning from Southern California where the day is just getting started. I look forward to sharing this time with you today and to what you bring back to share with us. Big Hugs and Coffeetime Cheers to All. ~barb~
here is one
hope you all like!! lovens to Cherie Barbara and sweet sisssie Bettie!!!
Looking in the eyes of Love – the Corrs
hhahahahahahhah!!!
so beautiful all of you are love yinns!! :love: :love: :love:
another one
love you guy’s my sweetest excellent hostestesss’s loves you B’s C’sxxooxoxooxoxo
I very loosely counted . . . .
always fun trying to come close to the 25
(plus changes in tenses and duplicates and maybe
a word or two that might not be in the original).
PUSHING FORWARD
Welcoming the night,
but wondering where
the time has gone,
I look beyond
the distant light.
And holding on tight,
letting heartaches go,
I can only push on
to live the rest
of my life.
(c) barbara kausteklis 10-26-11
IS IT LOST
Be my one and only love
Every thing you want I will be
I welcome you to my world wit arms open wide
You are but the wonders of me
Just call my name
I am bleedin love for your love
Written By: Bettie Davis ——————— © October 26 , 2o11
This has been such a lot of fun. Thanks again to Bettie for sharing her wonderful poetry and to Cherie and Jon and Cheryl and to all who visit and share their encouragement and their words. Please don’t let the time stop you from coming back to share. I’ll be checking back throughout the evening. Big Hugs to all and I look forward to next month’s Pick-Apart.
thank you all of you for a wonderful Blog I love your pic-a- parts I have so much fun as you can see (giggles)