Saturday Share, Come One ~ Come All !!!
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This is the blog where folks who decided
come and post their “Collab” Poetry!!!
Earlier in the week, a blog was posted inviting
everyone to come and give “One-More-Line”
to generate lines for this “Collab” Poetry.
This week we generated 113 Lines!
These are the folks who came to give lines this week:
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This week’s line was:
Hope that you will join in on the fun with collabs and/or comments!
Everyone can participate…you need not to have left any lines.
The lines are located here: Get Lost in the Lines
Pick a few, add a few of your own…and create!
And Please…
Love & Light,
Angel
Good evening and welcome poetry fans to the CPC’s flagship challenge, the Saturday Share. I’m looking forward to reading your craftings of lines by you and your CPC Pals!
Looking At The World
Looking at the world through a magnifying glass
So, much is seen when looking close not in a flash
Always just a quick look then flash and dash
The world looks so much different as closeness lasts
Seems so, harmless why can`t we all love as one class
Wondering how long we will I believe I`m getting a rash
With so much pollution and littered with trash
And just look at all that ash
Have to wash off the leans as coated in ash
We might be very surprised by what we see when we look through that lens again grasp
I’m standing up tall to take an even better look as
We just have to leave things in the past.
As I spot a fish swimming in the brook fast
The shadow was so bit I thought Id take a better look with cleaner glass
As viewing one had pulled down his pants and slide on ones glass!
And the glow of it all blinded my view as brass
Amazing what we see when we look at the world up close what may flash
We discover details we never saw before and new structures even the rear ends exposed fast
Angel Love, Bettie, Flossie, barbara k., Scotorum
THE GREAT VIEW FROM THE MAGNIFYING GLASS
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We might be very surprised by what we see when we look through that lens
The world looks so much different as closeness brings
It will even make you look cross eyed if you look too close
We discover details we never saw before and new structures exposed
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Looking at the world through a magnifying glass
So much is seen when looking close not in a flash
Beauty with island surrounded by waters and green grass
Always just a quick look then flash and dash
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Finding hidden gems behind the daily signs
In between the fine lines once blind
All the gems that I find will surely be all mine
Yet we still have to learn to read between the lines
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Learning were to go
No one ever really knows
Lookin though the magnifying glass sure do make snow flow
Open your eyes, heart to a brighter view
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You will see many things you never knew
There is so much we have to look forward to
Its all good it we go two by too
Take a look at life and not be so blue
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Lookin though the magnifying glass is just like Allie in wonderland
Only much much better cuz this way you see every thing twice
That would certainly entice
Yeah it would and that would be just so nice
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When lookin though the magnifying glass you kin count many stars never ever seen before flow
As the night sky is all aglow
Shows a different perspective of life
You may see a whole lots of other things if you just turn on the light
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First we must look inwards at our own self
Take a better look see and then look on the shelf
Things are not always as they appear
Some times you have to use you ears to hear
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Look at the world a little bit closer
And you kin see all the openings
A whole new world of possibilities opens up
And all of this from just lookin at things though a magnifying glass
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Imaginations runs wild when lookin though the magnifying glass
Use a magnifying glass to increase the apparent of praise
Others spirits you could raise
The magnifying glass make most things just an illusion
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If you see something scary you might need a transfusion
But if you look close they are in such profusion
At times causing so much confusion
Best to awaken and not to snooze
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With a round magnifying glass I can make magic talk
Perhaps dreams I can unlock
Allows you to see every small blade of grass
Reveals it to be quite a substantial mass
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Written By: Bettie Davis ———————— © September o6 , 2o12
Look at the world a little bit closer
And you kin see all the openings
A whole new world of possibilities opens up
And all of this from just lookin at things though a magnifying glass
Having so fun and wonderin just how long it will last
The world looks so much different as closeness brings
We might be very surprised by what we see when we look through that lens
Take a look at life and not be so blue
Imaginations runs wild when lookin though the magnifying glass
I’m standing up tall to take an even better look
We have to learn to read between the lines
And also make everything Grow in rows
There is so much we have to look forward to
Open your eyes, heart to a brighter view
You will see many things you never knew
Wondering how long it will last
Amazing what we see when we look at the world up close
CPC: WRITERS
BETTIE/ANNGEL LOVE/ JTWHO/ SCROTRUM/ BARB K/FLOSSIE/ DIANE/ MARCIA
Zooming into my future with magifying glass
A future that surely will surpass
With a round magnifying glass I can make Magic talk
I’m standing up tall to take an even better look
We might be very surprised by what we see when we look through that lens
A different view it certainly does expose
You will see many things you never knew
There is so much we have to look forward to
Magnifying glass make most things just an illusion
Things are not always as they appear
A whole new world of possibilities opens up
And all of this from just lookin at things though a magnifying glass
Shows a different perspective of life
Havin so fun and wonderin just how long it will last
Finally . . . . sorry this took so long.
MAKING THINGS RIGHT
by Barbara K
A CPC Collab
This morning as I sit right here
to write down these few words,
I look around at what I see,
a world in need of our help
and sadness comes over me
as I wonder how long
it will last.
From far away,
it might be kind of hard to tell
how much damage we’ve really done,
but when I look a bit closer,
it doesn’t take a magnifying glass
to know what we have to do,
just our senses
and the good sense
that we have.
And as I feel the breeze this morning
and walk barefoot through the grass,
I can see the trash strewn about
as I inhale the pollution in the air,
and can tell we have so much to do
to clean up the mess we’ve made
of what’s been entrusted to our care.
And while we have a long way to go
to begin to make things right,
I know that if we each do our part
for Mother Earth and all of us,
looking at the world
through a magnifying glass
will show not only
how much we have left to do
but also how much we care.
(c) barbara kausteklis 9-9-12
Thanks to Angel Love for this powerful theme
and to Angel Love, Diane, Flossie and Bettie
for sharing lines with me.
Wonderful collabs by all…so sorry to have missed it. I did want to find time to do one, but it was totally impossible to even get on the computer! Love you all! :love: :love: :love: