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• CreativePoetryCorral says:

  September 12, 2012 at 11:35 pm

  This week’s line:

  Blinded by the tears I cry (Angel Love)

  ~

  Tears cried when they simply look and give a blank stare (barbara k)

  As I need to be aware (Diane)

  Tears shed in the rain no one knows (Bettie)

  Let all those tears out and go with life and let thing once again glow (Flossie)

  Its time to let sum good joys flow (Bettie)

  So wipe those tears away and smile like a pro.(Flossie)

  And let sum good lovin flow (Bettie)

  should you always get paid for what you know[tony]

  Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed (barbara k)

  Beside myself not knowing feelings I dread (Diane)

  It would be nice to be smilin instead (Bettie)

  Like living on thin thread.(Flossie)

  He’s gone I heard over and over in my head (Marcia)

  And there is no need to dread (Bettie)

  why did i purchase that queen-size bed?[tony]

  Emotions expressed through writing sometimes eases the pain (barbara k)

  Writing keeps me sane!!!!! (Silver Lining)

  I release all my pain (Bettie)

  Will my heart ever let go of the stain (Marcia)

  I want my dark world cleansed by the rain (Michelle K)

  Dark and rain is but always my place to hide (Bettie)

  I let my emotion out in my writing and take pride (Flossie)

  Writtin is a grand place ta start and let it all ride (Bettie)

  you can’t find what went down the drain[tony]

  Directions to go …too many I know (Silver Lining)

  All directions lead to sum where I do not know but one I will so take slow (Bettie)

  I will follower though on this know (Bettie)

  Where ever I go in life I will live for tomorrow (Flossie)

  Live tomorrow wit out any sorrows (Bettie)

  Unable to understand why (Diane)

  Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine (Bettie)

  You can never let go of someone who dies (Marcia)

  Oh my my how time flies (Bettie)

  Hardest time is when we say our goodbyes (Flossie)

  Then never say goodbye just say see you bye ‘ n bye (Bettie)

  what if they just pretend and lie?[tony]

  Making me hide as I feel shy (Diane)

  I feel but always on the fly (Bettie)

  The embarrassment makes me want to die (Michelle K)

  With all the Hassan just make the tie (Bettie)

  Tears on my pillow I cried for you (Bettie)

  Many nights of feeling so blue (Michelle K)

  And just to think you never got the clue (Bettie)

  The many tears That I have cried for love never shown (Bettie)

  An emptiness to feel of being alone (Michelle K)

  After all this time and your still gone (Bettie)

  i thought you were my personal don juan[tony]

  I love when it rain then me tears will never see known (Bettie)

  And the secret will never be blown (Michelle K)

  Only the tracks of my tears will be shown (Bettie)

  Let the rain wash away all tracks of my tears (Bettie)

  For I’m tired of living in fear (Flossie)

  Things will be better in coming years (Michelle K)

  The feel of your sweet lips on my ear (Bettie)

  who cares if the end is near[tony]

  Not knowing who to trust with my feelings as an introvert releasing to sky (Diane)

  Each day people play with the hearts and lies (Flossie)

  Put all lies in a pile then fly (Bettie)

  careful or you’ll be a victim bye and bye[tony]

  These tears that I shed do fall on the blind eyes (Bettie)

  Blinded by these tears I can not see why (Bettie)

  As I hang my head in sorrow I did cry for a love I could never fine (Bettie)

  Shed tears in my pillow all night long I did (Bettie)

  Crying and hurting like a little kid (Michelle K)

  I can no longer see the sky (Scotorum)

  Yet I still wanna to learn how to fly (Bettie)

  Everything is dim and starts to die (Michelle K)

  I feel my future fly off high (Scotorum)

  And that but always makes me wanna see more of the high skis (Bettie)

  Above the clouds up in the sky (Michelle K)

  Till inner sight reveals the lie (Scotorum)

  To all blind eyes these lies will fly (Bettie)

  The way you lie even the blind eye can see (Bettie)

  You can never ever try and fool me (Michelle K)

  Oh but I just love the way you lie (Bettie)

  You always get a twitch in your eye (Michelle K)

  I cried a mile a minute the day you walked away (Bettie)

  Though my heart felt the pain when you walk away I still wanted you to stay (Bettie)

  when i’m at the shelter, you can’t come and play [tony]

  Only but for a little while you can stay (Bettie)

  the matrons allow no affectionate display[tony]

  All that runnin around in dismays (Bettie)

  but still rules are here to stay [tony]

  Ole rules new rule and none never seem to fade (Bettie)

  but one rule is certain-you cannot get —-[tony]

  you need to find help-to that end i pray

  Fasting will also help I do say (Bettie)

  maybe a swami will make you o.k.[tony]

  A good cleanin will but always make one wanna stay (Bettie)

  but home cookin’ is better, if you know what i say[tony]

  I so hear that mommas cookin is but always the best makes all who eat wanna stay (Bettie)

  then that’s the kitchen where i wanna play[tony]

  your too-indulgent mother made you this way [tony]

  Face all powder up and lookin like clay (Bettie)

  she stole all your guts and you liked it this way[tony]

  And all this happen in the month of may (Bettie)

  i still remember the day [tony]

  It waz all like a roll is the hay (Bettie)

  and now the cost is too much to defray[tony]

  Yep wit the costs ta day they be ski high no time for delay (Bettie)

  an absentee father held too-little sway

  It does ten to make most go astray (Bettie)

  he cared for his mistress, but you-no way[tony]

  I do declare and wit that she just might stay (Bettie)

  we do what we may[tony]

  And all this doing in just a day (Bettie)

  all time is relative in a way[tony]

  And most of them wanna stay (Bettie)

  the drug-addled father of our children you are today

  All this can really make the child be in disarray (Bettie)

  d.c.f. will have their say (tony)

  That they do and but always have the last say (Bettie)

  the release of a poem helps this all go away [tony]

  Expressing my feelings on a gloomy day (Michelle K)

  Misty eyes as I keep asking why (Michelle K)

  All this mishap is makin me shy (Bettie)

  Mourning over my special guy (Michelle K)

  Still till this very day and it leaves me to wonder why (Bettie)

  excuse me while i kiss the sky [tony]

  I but always like to fly high (Bettie)

  your love found new depths with this guy[tony]

  No one must ever see me this way (Michelle K)

  In me own little corner I will always stay (Bettie)

  take my hand my child as we pray(dee)

  tears of joy are okay(dee)

  Hiding my feelings so others won’t hurt (Michelle K)

  if you were broke, i’d give you my shirt [tony]

  i would help pick you out of the dirt[tony h]

  Make sure check all over you that you are not hurt (Flossie)

  and seeing you needy, i would not flirt[tony h.]

  That shirt really does match my skirt (Bettie)

  this is no time for a fashion alert[tony]

  Alert all spirited up and doing skirt shirt and outta the dirt now um ready to flirt (Bettie)

  i believe this be the love alert [tony]

  and that’s a good thing i assert [tony]

  Flirt do not hurt as long as no one get hurt (Flossie)

  a woman like this is our just dessert[tony]

  In many ways it does make one wanna flirt the skirt if you still know how and not be the jerk (Bettie)

  a sincere gift of love will always work[tony]

  even tho’ ’round morality i used to skirt[tony h.]

  Cryin in me tea cup every day and still dont quite know just what to say (Bettie)

  just take a front seat in this morality play[tony]

  Crying is a natural way of letting go of pent up emotions (Flossie)

  I don’t think you hear my ocean of cries (Flossie)

  since you mention it, my heart tries[tony]

  I pretend I’m gonna be ok But on the inside it really hurts (Flossie)

  i’m tryin’ to luv ya, my love comes in spurts[tony]

  Love is what makes the world go round but every one has give up on tryin (Bettie)

  Tears are a way to cleanse the soul(dee)

  not always leaving a heart cold(dee)

  we must try to get you back in the fold[tony]

  our sweet adeline girl whose story be told[tony]