Saturday Share, Come One ~ Come All !!!
Please leave a heart if you like this blog!
This is the blog where folks who decided
come and post their “Collab” Poetry!!!
Earlier in the week, a blog was posted inviting
everyone to come and give “One-More-Line”
to generate lines for this “Collab” Poetry.
This week we generated 152 Lines!
These are the folks who came to give lines this week:
(Click on avatars to visit profiles)
This week’s line was:
Hope that you will join in on the fun with collabs and/or comments!
Everyone can participate…you need not to have left any lines.
The lines are located here: Get Lost in the Lines
Pick a few, add a few of your own…and create!
And Please…
Love & Light,
Angel
BLINDED BY TEARS
~
Blinded by the tears I cry
Will my heart ever let go of the stain
After all this time and your still gone
I thought you were my personal don juan
~
Though my heart felt the pain when you walk away I still wanted you to stay
Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed
Should you always get paid for what you know
Why did i purchase that queen size bed
~
I want my dark world cleansed by the rain
Writtin is a grand place ta start and let it all ride
Directions to go too many I know
You cant find what went down the drain
~
Dark and rain is but always my place to hide
Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine
I will never begin to know
The embarrassment makes me want to die
~
All directions lead to sum where I do not know but one I will so take slow
I will follow though on this know
Let the rain wash away all tracks of my tears
And hope to see a better tomorrow that follows
~
Not knowing who to trust with my feelings as an introvert releasing to sky
Each day people play with the hearts and lies
Put all lies in a pile then fly
Careful or youll be a victim bye and bye
~
These tears that I shed do fall on the blind eyes
Blinded by these tears I can not see why
As I hang my head in sorrow I did cry for a love I could never fine
Shed tears in my pillow all night long I did
~
Crying and hurting like a little kid
I can no longer see the sky
Yet I still wanna to learn how to fly
Fly on cloud nine for a true love thats real and make me wanna touch the ski
~
Live tomorrow wit out any sorrows
Till inner sight reveals the lie
To all blind eyes these lies will fly
The way you lie even the blind eye can see
~
Oh but I just love the way you lie
You but always get a twitch in your eye
But still rules are here to stay
Ole rules new rule and none never seem to fade
~
They all still turn out to be a lie every time you say you will stay
The release of a poem helps this all go away
Expressing my feelings on a gloomy day
Misty eyes as I keep asking why
~
All this mishap is makin me shy
Mourning over my special guy
Still till this very day and it leaves me to wonder why
Hiding my feelings so others wont hurt
~
Written By: Bettie Davis ——————– © September 13 , 2o12
//
~TEARS~
Unable to understand why
Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine
No one must ever see me this way
Hiding my feelings so others won’t hurt
Love is what makes the world go round but every one has give up on tryin
As I hang my head in sorrow I did cry for a love I could never fine
Tears on my pillow I cried for you
I cried a mile a minute the day you walked away
Though my heart felt the pain when you walk away I still wanted you to stay
I pretend I’m gonna be ok But on the inside it really hurts
Hardest time is when we say our goodbyes
Where ever I go in life I will live for tomorrow
~~~~
Crying is a natural way of letting go of pent up emotions
I love when it rain then me tears will never see known
Tears shed in the rain no one knows
Let the rain wash away all tracks of my tears
Why so many tears drops fall from these eyes of mine
Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed
Let all those tears out and go with life and let thing once again glow
So wipe those tears away and smile like a pro
Live tomorrow wit out any sorrows
Things will be better in coming years
TY ALL FOR LOVELY LINES:
BARB,MARCIA,DIANE,ANGELINO,BETTIE,ANGEL LOVE,MICHELLE,SILVER,DEE,FLOSSIE
Sorry to be so late, but my life is in a bit of an upheaval at the moment…i may not be around too much for the next while, but will try as i can. Love to all! :love: :love: :love:
~
~
A CPC Collab with pals: Diane, Bettie and Silver Lining
I Still Remember It`s Okay
Blinded By The Tears I Cry as I cried
Tears shed in the rain no one knows
I wanted my dark world cleansed by the rain
Where you nor anyone could find what went down the drain
Releasing all my pain
Will my heart ever let go of the stain
You can never let go of someone who dies
I still remember the day
Misty eyes as I keep asking why
Beside myself not knowing feelings I dread
It would had been nice to be smilin instead
Emotions so close to the surface and many tears to be shed
I could not see the sky
Yet I still wanted to learn how to fly
Needing to let all those tears out and go with life and let thing once again glow
With ones gone within know giving me wings to unfold
Its time to let sum good joys flow as I learned to look at all in a positive flow
Let writing keep me sane as I gain and grow
Emotions expressed through writing sometimes eases the pain
I do want to feel alive and stay here to live my life to the fullest
Tears of joy it1s okay
Take my hand as one let`s pray
Knowing our love ones are within to guide us in every way
To live to fly even higher than we can imagine with their love within every day
Angel Love, Bettie, Michelle K.,Tony, Marcia,Scotorum,
Silver Lining, Flossie, Barbara K., Dee
Yup Photobucket is STH tonight. Found the perfect pic for this and tried every which way to load it into P-Bucket, to no avail. But here’s an older one I had already stored and used once in a PnP.
LADY LOVER’S LAMENT
Blinded by the tears I cry,
never really knowing why.
Expressions on a gloomy day
helps enlighten a new way..
Misty eyed as I ask why
Mourning with my special guy.
The one who helped me fly so high
who got me wet when I was dry.
Crying like a little kid,
concerned that I might flip my lid,
till I no longer see the sky.
Yet I still long to learn to fly!
Hope gets dim and starts to die.
I feel my future fly off high,
above the clouds up in the sky,
till inner sight reveals the lie.
Routine has got me in its grasp,
held fast by circumstances’ clasp.
Though dreams of us fill every day,
encumbrance halts a break away..
So we live on day by day,
dragging our four feet of clay,
stuck among familial brambles,
neither ready for the shambles.
Alhough we savor the same goal;
Moving on would rip a hole.
Could love fulfilled ever fill it?
Or would guilt cripple and kill it?
Though uncertainty restrains us,
Still the dreaming well sustains us.
A precious tie which binds us tight
till someday comes a new daylight,.
Copyright September 14th 2012 RGD
The lovers who dreamed up a line: Angel Love, Bettie, Michelle (5), Tony.
‘
Blinded by the tears I cry,
Sitting here asking my self why.
Listening to my inner voice lie.
Its not going to be alright.
Thoughts tangled and twined up in a rollercoaster ride.
Days go by sadly in time.
It seems like nothing again well ever be fine.
Its so dark here in my mind.
Yesterday I cried and cried till a smile finally came upon my face.
I knew then the tears had found the right place.
I stood up and paced .
I was lost in this horrible place.
In this day I felt my heart stop beating.
I knew I was being defeated .
I couldn’t bring my self back down to seating.
Only thing I could do was yell out this dam city.
All at once I saw my angel crying.
My soul was blackening and I was dying.
My world once again was cruel and lying.
And I was left here tormented and crying.
All fabulous collabs and happy weekend everyone! <3
FLOWING
by Barbara K
A CPC Collab
Tears flowing from my eyes
and streaming down my face,
emotions bottled up inside
and I haven’t the vaguest
reason how or why
except they’re so easy to see,
worn directly on my sleeve,
how I’m feeling at the moment
even if there’s a smile
worn upon my face.
Waves of emotion washing
over my heart and soul,
tears spilling over
releasing sadness
as well as joy.
And at the end of a day
I gather them up again,
holding them close
and embracing each one,
even the sadness of yesterday
when I was blinded
by the tears I cried.
And I move forward
with the break of dawn
and a new day,
one foot in front
of the other
and determined
to carry on.
(c) barbara kausteklis 9-15-12
Thanks to Angel Love and Bettie
for their lines woven in with my own.
A new day, one foot in front of the other, determined to carry on…can’t be any other way. Wonderful write, Barbara! :love: :love: :love:
Much love and gratitude to all who came out this week to participate in the collab process. I have a family medical crisis that I am dealing with and may not be around for the collabs for a bit, but will try as I can. They will still be posted and Bob will be filling in as needed. Big hugs! :love: :love: :love: