POEMS: Surprise Surprise!, The Legend of Buxom Betty and I Love Lucy

These were written for the CPC Friday Fling poetry challenge, where Michelle and I are looking for Acrostics involving some sort of surprise explained or presented.  I tried one using all one word lines.  The second is a “Hidden Acrostic” in which the letters of the words which read vertically are hidden in different locations in each line rather than the first letters.  I capitalized the hidden letters to make them easier to spot.

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Simply
Understanding
Rudimentary
Privacy
Rarely
Involves
Substantial
Effort.

Acrostic Copyright October 25th 2012 RGD

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Surprise

I was just a


L ittle boy when,
O ver the TV airwaves, a
V ery funny sight appeared
E lectronically.


L ucy was working in a candy factory.
U nable to keep pace, she began eating the candies. The little boy exclaimed: “Lucy’s got
C hocolate all over her face!” A story cherished by my mother in later
Y ears.

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